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How about a Cigar lol

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No, that is not a cigar, it is one of his chewies! I am really looking for some feedback on this picture!! :D
Image size
3272x3264px 6.11 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D5100
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
300 mm
ISO Speed
160
Date Taken
Feb 25, 2014, 2:58:07 AM
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I really like this one!
I think the black and white makes all the difference here. It really differentiates it from the others you have. Although using black and white can be tricky sometimes, it really melds together here and I like that.
And also, it's an action shot! Obviously, that's not the most attractive face Tuker has ever made, but it's looks much better than just him lying down and makes it a bit more interesting for the viewer.
But, I think the focus should be little more on the nose next time to make the mouth look a bit better. And the right side of his mouth is kinda overexposed. This is just nit picky stuff, but I want you to know it so that it gives you something to build upon. I think we've told you these things before though, so you should know that's one of your weak points.
But overall, the improvement I see between this photo and some of your others is great! For a young photographer too, I think you are well on your way!